Very nice! The animation is much smoother and the jokes are non-cliche!
I noticed that, during the trip home, Kat (or is it Anna?) says that Orbulan will "enslave us" when on-screen it says "destroy us." Minor, but just bringing it to your attention.

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Pretty good! Once again, the fight scenes were good, the new ending rocked, you pointed out every cliche, and some how... a lesson was learned... and then forgotten.
I'll be waiting for episode 4.


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wow, this was amazing! these wario ware tooned flash animations always baffle me with their greatness.

i have no clue what the back story on this is, but it's still funny.

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Now this is some serious comedy gold, Behon! You're a rising star! This last one could have been on Adult Swim! Only one critique (since the messing up of Kat's line was mentioned already) is that the spiderwebs inexplicably dissapeared from around 9-Volt's Gamecube. Sad, because those webs were a funny in-joke.

Now the good. I am pleasantly surprised with how 18-Volt turned out. Initially, he struck me as a very lame, and, well, blatantly racist character. Now that the show makes fun of him, though, he's a riot, even if 9-Volt is quite possibly less patient with him than is canon!

Also, the spoof of the Powerpuff Girls intro in the fight scene had me laughing my ass off. Keep up the good work. Oh, and I'd still like to be a writer, but in the meantime, I'll keep supporting you!

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One more thing: it's rad to see Mona finally kicking some ass!

"Behold the power of kickboxing!" Awesome.

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This was sheer brilliance from where I sit!

Though it kinda throws me off that some of the scenes have a different quality than others. What I mean is, in most scenes, Orbulon is drawn and shaded well, while in some scenes, most notably the fight scene, he's not shaded at all. It didn't keep me from enjoying it, but it's something to keep in mind for later.

Keep up the good work and don't rush yourself. As long as the toons are good, they're worth the wait.

ow that was pretty cool..the animation and such but i didnt quite understand the content. It may be bacause i dont play these nintendo games all that often but anyway great job ....

That's because he (and the other characters when they're in fighting stances) isn't using his normal model, but is just one drawing made up for that part. I'm guessing you know that already, though, and the shading's a good point that I'll probably start doing.